Bonjour à tous, je viens de finir une expression écrite en anglais. Pourriez-vous y apporter une correction S.V.P..
Voici mon sujet: Takeaway food is becoming more and more popular. Account for this evolution in contemporary society.
Pour cela je devais écrire 200 mots, mais j'ai l'impression qu'il me manque un petit quelque chose pour clore cette expression. Si vous avez une idée, je suis preneur. Par la même occasion, pourriez vous me dire si le texte répond plutôt au sujet demandé.
Nowadays we devote little time to eating in our current society. When we leave our work or the school at noon, we are very satisfied to pass on our road a takeaway food outlet. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time.
During the last years takeaway food was very simple. For example a simple sandwich with ham and butter either a salad. This effect of repetition would have been able to cause the fall of the empire of the takeaway food. But little by little this type of catering has developed. Many chefs perk up again to propose a good, healthy, decent, sophisticated food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of the takeaway food with the intention of getting out of the commonness.
To answer the customers demands, there are many kinds of takeaway food outlets, offering different dishes, Chinese, pizza, pasta, sandwiches ... to satisfy all tastes.
The advantages of the takeaway food are that it allows for everybody to eat for cheap and quickly. We have the possibility of lunching on the spot from time to time. But most of the time we buy ourselves something to eat while reading a book, looking at the shop windows of stores, sitting down in a public garden, doing it shopping, etc.
Merci d'avance.
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