Hey there!
je postule pour un Master spécialisé et je dois fournir une lettre de motivation rédigée en anglais.
C'est pourquoi j'ai besoin de votre aide :/ ou plutôt de votre avis, ou d'éventuelles modifications à faire s'il vous plait.
Je vous remercie d'avance ^^ !!!!



Subject: Personal statement for XXX School

Dear Sir or Madam

I am asking to be considered for the master 1 degree XXX in your school.

I began my studies at University XXX in studying Economics and management. These three years of Bachelor degree allowed me to acquire knowledge in management but also in accounting and finance. I have developed a great interest in International business, therefore I decided to continue my studies in International economic Master 1 degree, which I could improve my knowledge in international finance, and mainly business English.

This training is rewarding, but does not correspond to my expectations. I made the choice to reorient for several reasons: On the one hand I wish to do my training in apprenticeship because I wish receive technical dimension and gain solid knowledge which I need, such as your course of negotiations practices. On the other hand, my various jobs allowed me to refine my professional choice. To this end I wish today orient my project towards the purchasing management and through my passions, automobile sector. Indeed, I am a passionate car enthusiast, I go each year to the Paris motor show which allowed me a solid understanding of this sector. I desire naturally integrate priority this business.

During my studies, I had several seasonal employment in Services firm in Paris. I trained for 5 months, I was in charge of selecting suppliers with the best quality / price ratio and to make them profitable for the company, while meeting customer’s deadlines. I also contributed in implementation of ISO 9001 quality system, which require analytical skills.
Moreover, I have developed a great interest in area of purchasing: how the company incorporates a technological change and how does this affect the purchasing strategy?

At the XXX School, I will have the opportunity to study in a great studious environment, and to combine my theoretical knowledge in economics and management that I acquired in Paris 1, and the operational aspect of your master degree. In addition, I strongly appreciate the information which I collected during the open house, convinced me of the demanding nature of your program. In particular, your personal accompaniment to the job searching.


Thanks for you times and consideration.
Yours faithfully